Feedback

Feedback was really important and good to get a range of people's opinions our thriller opening to see what our audience though of it whether it needed to be improved and how we would go about it. To do this we took our thriller into class to get some constuctive criticism.

The positive feedback we got consister of:

• Good matching of the action to soundtrack.
• Great locations that fitted with our opening.
• Smooth transitions.
• Effective use of flash from camera at the start of the production
• Variety of shots.
• Soundtrack was a great choice.
• Good choice of chacter costume.
• Good use of editing
• Use of voiceover helped us to grasp and understand the plot a bit more

Criticism: 

• The colours used at the start of the production made it unclear to see properly
• The titles at the start could have been slightly more professional

This feedback proved extremely useful, as we knew exactly what we had done right and also what needed to be improved on. We managed to change our titles so that they flashed on during the production instead of having a reeling credits scene at the start, and we darkened the video colours as originally we had planned on having a sort of misty effect over the top of the production, but although this may have influenced that fact that the protagonist was dreaming, it didn't look very professional and it made it unclear to see, so we darkened the colours slightly.